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Autumn Thoughts 6

Monday, 23 November 2015 15:19:46

and a single robin enquires 
what I’m doing here…

just taking one more look

before the wind and water

change things once again.

I’ve removed the last line, changed ‘there’ to ‘here’ and added more about the observer, me, and brought it back to the wider canvas: the year and its changes.

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